I went to school today and forgot my orange. We were going to a zoo which had a crocodile in and a monkey. We had to feed the crocodile pepper. We also felt the monkey it was so soft. After a snack we went to see a baby elephant we also fed him an orange and pepper and also felt him. Then we had lunch. I had a banana, sandwich and some biscuits. I said “thank you” to the Zookeeper and got on the coach. When we got back to school, we told everyone about the fun we had.
Wow, very imaginative I love it! Keep up the good work and I will look forward to seeing more – bye!
Well done Olivia I love your piece of work – well done.
Wow, really good! I hope you’re going to write loads of stories like that.